Thinking about Katie

So I thought it might be interesting for you to take a look at the original (cropped a bit). I like the expression on her face. Like she knows something you don't. I am also obviously not a professional. If I was, I would have known to look for the hung up earring and the creases in her neck (I'm sure a pro would make sure they were covered by hair, or her chin, or something). It could also use a more interesting background (darker, brighter, colored, etc).